Aryeh Ruiz
Ms .Angie
Period 4
2/27/2009
WAR!!!
The paper needs more research so for every subject I’m going to put the subject and what i need to research and later i will write a full outline
My thesis is...
The war of the American Revolution was won by the Americans. But how?
I. the book starts off in the Boston massacre it started with gunshots and maybe i think it does because i haven't read that far yet is going to end in gunshots. But i am going to research more about this.
a. the Boston massacre what happen there from what I understand.
b. starting with the battle of Lexington and concord. This is where the “shot heard around the world" was heard. Explain what happen here and who won and how.
c. a big step for the army of the Americans when George Washington was elected their commander. This helped a big time. he wanted everything one way and he got it that way. Order.
d. ups and downs of the Americans.
e. Benedict Arnold how he betrayed the Americans.
II. Technique used in the war.
a. type of technique and how they are being used today.
b. the V used today and what’s the same and differences of what was used in war.
2/26/2009
2/24/2009
ONE THESIS PLEASE
In the book Rise to Rebellion by Jeff Shaara it all starts from gunshots and end in gunshots. how did the Americans manage to win the war if they were new to fighting compared to the red coats who have years of experience.
2/20/2009
New Question for the American Revolution Essay.
How did guerrilla warfare help the Americans colonist win the war for Independence?
my classmates helped me make the question a little better. at first it wasn't good enough or clear enough so i think its good now.
my classmates helped me make the question a little better. at first it wasn't good enough or clear enough so i think its good now.
2/18/2009
QQC #2
"An Army without order, Regularity & Discipline is no better than a commission’d mob."
said George Washington, the leader of the continental army to a great succes over the British. Geroge washington said this when a whole bunch of his man were taken out. the man were taken out because there wasnt an order everything was chaos at first but washingotn wanted to try out htis new technique, trying to do everyhtng together. and after fighint with this in mind the american won the war and became a country. later george washington became the first president of the united states.
said George Washington, the leader of the continental army to a great succes over the British. Geroge washington said this when a whole bunch of his man were taken out. the man were taken out because there wasnt an order everything was chaos at first but washingotn wanted to try out htis new technique, trying to do everyhtng together. and after fighint with this in mind the american won the war and became a country. later george washington became the first president of the united states.
2/13/2009
Resaerch Rap
(Repeat Google in the background to a steady beat)
W sat on the table and started to research
after a couple of minutes my head started to hurt
we started number 4 and we realized that the document wouldn't open before our eyes.
started looking for this document started on Google and ms g said is better not to use Google gents.
so we went back to the library page and put in the library card number. went on history study center and it was like mentor helped find the information to this research hunt
finished with that and now we had to find some text. Words.
W sat on the table and started to research
after a couple of minutes my head started to hurt
we started number 4 and we realized that the document wouldn't open before our eyes.
started looking for this document started on Google and ms g said is better not to use Google gents.
so we went back to the library page and put in the library card number. went on history study center and it was like mentor helped find the information to this research hunt
finished with that and now we had to find some text. Words.
2/12/2009
Annoted Bibliography AR
Hi Guys,
Here is your second blog assignment!
1. Find one good source on the San Diego Library website for your research topic. (One you think you will be able to use or that helps you shape your research question, or answer it)
2. Cite that source using the MLA guidelines listed on my DP
3. Write a paragraph explaining that source (what was it about? what topics doe sit cover? why was is useful? how did you use it?)
4. There should be two sources for each group.
5. Feel free to copy and paste the MLA citation, but both people should read the article and write their own annotation (paragraph explaining the source)
"Leaders, strategy and tactics in the American War of Independence." Study Unit. History Study Center. ProQuest LLC. 12 Feb. 2009
this page helped me a lot about my question but i think that a little more pages and more time researching might helped me understand how and the Americans win the the war. i earned a lot about how the military branches were formed and when. another question i might have is why have an army, navy and marines?? best thing i learned from the article was that George Washington led the colonist to victory then became president, i did not know that.
Here is your second blog assignment!
1. Find one good source on the San Diego Library website for your research topic. (One you think you will be able to use or that helps you shape your research question, or answer it)
2. Cite that source using the MLA guidelines listed on my DP
3. Write a paragraph explaining that source (what was it about? what topics doe sit cover? why was is useful? how did you use it?)
4. There should be two sources for each group.
5. Feel free to copy and paste the MLA citation, but both people should read the article and write their own annotation (paragraph explaining the source)
"Leaders, strategy and tactics in the American War of Independence." Study Unit. History Study Center. ProQuest LLC. 12 Feb. 2009
this page helped me a lot about my question but i think that a little more pages and more time researching might helped me understand how and the Americans win the the war. i earned a lot about how the military branches were formed and when. another question i might have is why have an army, navy and marines?? best thing i learned from the article was that George Washington led the colonist to victory then became president, i did not know that.
2/11/2009
Rise to Rebellion
Rise to Rebellion by Jeff ShaaraThe book Rise to Rebellion is a book about the American Revolution, it starts from the Boston Massacre all the way to the signing to the Declaration of Independence. Im at the part where the people are starting to realize and think of what the king of Britain is wrong and the people are angry i think is where they start planning something. From what i know I think that the people are going to go to the Boston Tea Party and make a mess and start a war.
A good question related to the book and to the American Revolution is "How had the American's war for independence influence the tactics which were used for battle?"
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